Talk:Poor design

This is very weak right now you need to add things baout real examples of poor design since what is here can be explained by the fall. All poor design arguments looks at the animal and plant kinfdoms primarily. Sir Trollsalot

"You"? Please go ahead and add anything you know yourself :) - Fredrik (talk) 18:18, 9 Jun 2004 (UTC)

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Poor design can also be seen in the way that babies are created. A male sperm cell merges with a female egg. The resulting fetus generates a large amount of either estrogen or testosterone, depending upon the gender of the fetus. This indirection sometimes causes medical or psychological problems when the fetus cannot take that much sex hormone.

I found this a little confusing. I replaced it with

Sometimes a human body produces too much estrogen or testosterone. That causes medical or psychological problems.

Did I delete too much ?