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Warnings about the consequesnes of the Disengagement[edit]

https://www.chabad.org/library/article_cdo/aid/319985/jewish/Gaza-

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 7 January 2024[edit]

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Please revise the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph to include important context on settler relocation. This fact is verifiable using the attached reference under ISBN 9781139493963.

Eight thousand Jewish settlers from the 21 settlements in the Gaza Strip were relocated, receiving an average of USD $200,000 in compensation per family. ^[1]

Also, please note there exists some typo of "thi" in the very first words of the article. ARationalPerson (talk) 19:50, 7 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Good day—RetroCosmos ^talk 11:14, 5 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ Rivlin, Paul (2010). The Israeli Economy from the Foundation of the State through the 21st Century. Cambridge University Press. p. 245. ISBN 9781139493963.

Cuycken writes that Israel DOES NOT occupy Gaza[edit]

Hanne Cuyckens is currently being used as a source supporting the claim that Israel occupies Gaza in her article "Is Israel Still an Occupying Power in Gaza?" However, in her conclusion to that article she writes, "Given that there is no longer any effective control in the sense of Article 42 of the Hague Regulations, it is difficult to sustain that Gaza is still occupied." — Preceding unsigned comment added by UClaudius (talk • contribs) 23:47, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Viceglass[edit]

https://www.makorrishon.co.il/nrg/online/1/ART/793/162.html

Sharon Office: "In the absence of a Palestinian partner, the government initiated the disengagement plan in order to strengthen Israel's political position, improve its ability to protect its citizens and ease the suffering of the civilian population until such time as a Palestinian partner is found who will fulfill all the obligations of the road map and with whom it will be possible to conduct political negotiations and move forward Bye." Visgels: "The quote in 'Haaretz' is only partial. It is the first half of a sentence. All that is said is that in the period we are in, with a disbanded Palestinian Authority, with murderous Palestinian terrorism, there is not and will not be a political process that could, God forbid, lead to the establishment of a Palestinian state based on anarchy". 2.55.172.13 (talk) 07:03, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Greenhouses[edit]

Suggest including a reference to the further looting that occurred in early 2006, perhaps after the sentence that starts "In early 2006", with citation https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2006/2/13/looters-steal-gaza-greenhouses Alkflaeda (talk) 02:05, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Gisha quote[edit]

A quote was recently replaced with what should be a summary of the contents of the quote. Instead it changed the substance of what Gisha has stated. Here is the original quote:

Gaza residents may not bring a crate of milk into the Gaza Strip without Israeli permission; A Gaza university cannot receive visits from a foreign lecturer unless Israel issues a visitor’s permit; A Gaza mother cannot register her child in the Palestinian population registry without Israeli approval; A Gaza fisherman cannot fish off the coast of Gaza without permission from Israel; A Gaza nonprofit organization cannot receive a tax-exempt donation of goods without Israeli approval; A Gaza teacher cannot receive her salary unless Israel agrees to transfer tax revenues to the Palestinian Ministry of Education; A Gaza farmer cannot get his carnations and cherry tomatoes to market unless Israel permits the goods to exit Gaza; A Gaza student cannot study abroad without Israeli approval to open the Gaza-Egypt crossing.

The text now reads:

The Israeli human rights organization Gisha lists various examples of actions requiring Israeli permission or approval in the year following the disengagement, such as universities receiving visits from a foreign lecturer, parents registering children in the Palestinian population registry, residents bringing in a crate of milk into the Strip, and fishermen fishing off Gaza's coast. Other examples are student study abroad limitations due to the Gaza-Egypt crossing, teacher salary delays until Israel transfers tax revenues to the Palestinian Ministry of Education, and farmers unable to bring crops to market unless Israel allows the crops to exit Gaza.

Note that the original text states that Israeli approval is required to open the Gaza Egypt crossing, but it has been changed to "due to the Gaza-Egypt crossing" in the new text. DMH223344 (talk) 01:45, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Do you have any suggestions for paraphrasing the quote, rather than directly copy/pasting a large quote block per WP:QUOTEFARM? Wafflefrites (talk) 01:56, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[1] Rivlin, Paul (2010). The Israeli Economy from the Foundation of the State through the 21st Century. Cambridge University Press. p. 245. ISBN 9781139493963.

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