Wikipedia:Peer review/Dabbawala/archive1

Dabbawala

I recently wrote a duplicate article on this with another spelling, but when someone pointed me here, I found the existing article had more information. I'd like to help the editors who did this work to get it featured so:

1. At the moment it's kind of small. Any suggestions for expansion?
2. Any comments on the lead section?
3. Any comments on the existing body of the text?

What is the preferred length for featured articles? -- [[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm|^(talk)]] 22:17, Oct 2, 2004 (UTC)

As to length, there is no set guideline, the biggest thing is completeness. That said, I'm not sure when the last time an article too short to have multiple sections and a table of contents was promoted to featured article. I'm not sure what can be expanded except if you can give an idea of what the price is exactly and a comparison of what that is to the person's salary that utilizes the Dabbawala. Specific comments are that the text is a little too colloquial in parts, especially "fast food joints" and "B-schools". That whole paragraph has some issues with clarity and grammar. How are they able to do this task so well? - Taxman 03:14, Oct 3, 2004 (UTC)