Wikipedia:Peer review/Civilization III/archive1

Civilization III

How can this be improved? Seems to have quite a bit of content for a game article; is this a possible Featured Article Candidate? Johnleemk | Talk 15:32, 3 Oct 2004 (UTC)

• External book references (with ISBN codes). It is fairly complete, otherwise. [[User:Davodd|DAVODD «TALK»]] 05:41, Oct 4, 2004 (UTC)
• The worst thing about this article is that it is written for someone who knows quite a lot about this topic already. Overview starts with "Among its enhancements, Civilization III introduced ..." and this is not a helpful start to someone looking up this game. I think "Wonders" section needs improvements as there is nothing on that topic in Civilization II and someone who had never played this game would have no idea why this change is important. "Civilizations" section also needs improvements as "Qualities" is never explained. Revth 05:51, 4 Oct 2004 (UTC)
• Overview section should be improved with more explaining the Civ games and linking to appropriate articles. Also, tables should be updated to also list civilizations from the expansion packs. I may do some work on that one myself. Solver 19:08, 7 Oct 2004 (UTC)
• I think we need to think globally on the civilization articles IMO the following article are inter-related Civilization (computer game), Civilization II, Civilization III, Freeciv, Civilization: Call To Power. And there's a need for more there are several other clone and a Civilization board game that was the inspiration for Syd Meïer. I think a main article (I suggest Civilization games) could include common feature of those games and historical aspects while others articles could be centered on each version characteristics. Ericd 23:48, 8 Oct 2004 (UTC)