Wikipedia:Peer review/Blunsdon United/archive1

Blunsdon United

Not sure about this article. It has survived a VFD put some of the content seems to be unencyclopedic, and conatins at least one joke (or at least I assume that what the "fine" comment is). Any thoughts on how it can be improved? TigerShark 23:16, 16 Apr 2005 (UTC)

• Yes, ruthless deleting. (Of content, that is, not the article.) I was the staunchest supporter of this article when it was on VfD, so I guess I also have the responsibility to show I wasn't wrong. A lot of this simply doesn't belong in an encyclopedia: the quotes section needs to go in its entirety, the "infamous moment" section needs to be drastically trimmed, and many other loose facts need to be coalesced and rewritten. We're an encyclopedia, not a homepage provider. That said, it's not beyond saving. This article is primarily the work of one user, KeithV; I think collaborating with him is the way to go. JRM 23:31, 2005 Apr 16 (UTC)
• Massive trimming of article and perhaps some expansion. JuntungWu 08:03, 24 Apr 2005 (UTC)