Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Renaissance Center/archive1
Renaissance Center[edit]
This article was a stub for quite some time, and I was able to add a considerable amount of information about this interesting and well-known Detroit landmark. (Self-nomination) Gsgeorge 01:24, 17 Dec 2004 (UTC)
- Object - extremely short and no references. There has to be more material to add - more info on the history, on who works in there, whatever. You include a link to "Detroit Renaissance" (http://www.detroitrenaissance.com/) and say that it is "the group that financed the construction", but you don't say anything about them in the article itself. You don't have the years and dates wikied, and the "Nonetheless" in the last sentence of the lead doesn't make sense. And the last paragraph of the article seems to disagree with what you say in the lead (that the center revitalized the city). --Spangineer ∞ 02:15, Dec 17, 2004 (UTC)
- Object needs expansion as Spangineer said. [[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm|(talk)]] 08:19, Dec 17, 2004 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments. I've corrected a few things mentioned by Spangineer. Personally, I feel the article is very nice, but I can understand when you say it needs expansion. If there are enough objections I'll work on it for consideration in the near future. Thanks! Gsgeorge 12:32, 17 Dec 2004 (UTC)