Wikipedia:Peer review/Louis Riel/archive1

Louis Riel

This article is ready for FA status. Please make any changes you deem important so that it can go to this vote. Denni☯ 22:08, 2005 Mar 21 (UTC)

• OK Denni, I will start working on it in ernest now, give me a few days at least. For now, we need to elaborate on the passage in "Early life" that says "...who helped organize the group that supported Guillaume Sayer." Since Sayer is a red wiki, it is all too mysterious. Cheers, Fawcett5 23:43, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC)

Denni, I noticed that the article is not appearing properly on the main Wikipedia:Peer review page, did something get messed up, or was it archived? Could explain why there haven't been any other comments. I could really use some help to flesh out the trial section. I am still working on the North-West Rebellion section, but I'm running out of steam. Fawcett5 20:55, 28 Mar 2005 (UTC)

• I have put it on the Peer review page. -- JamesTeterenko 02:17, 31 Mar 2005 (UTC)
• Looks good to me, probably ready for Feature. -- Glen Finney 16:46, 31 Mar 2005 (UTC)
• Personally, I think we're getting close, but have three major areas left that need improvement:

1. The lead section needs to be expanded to 2-3 paragraphs. Could still use refinement, but is looking better now.
2. The trial section needs to be fleshed out a bit.
3. The legacy section needs to be reworked a bit to make it more stylistically consistent with the rest of the article.

hopefully, these will all get addressed within the next week or so, I don't want to rush it back to FAC prematurely. Fawcett5 17:48, 31 Mar 2005 (UTC)