Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Feynman diagram

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(From Cleanup) Feynman diagram - Writing is poor and unclear, particularly in the "Mathematical details" section. Someone who understands what it's trying to say should fix it. RSpeer 05:14, Mar 20, 2005 (UTC)

"Mathematical details" worked on. I think this is much better, but the whole article is vague; and I'm a mathematician, not a physicist Septentrionalis 19:30, 29 Apr 2005 (UTC)

  • Added to User:DoomBringer/Desk since this hasn't been updated for over a month. -- Beland 2 July 2005 03:43 (UTC)
  • I've gone over the article as best as I can. I wish I knew more about the subject, but it is a bit too complicated. I cleaned up some links and what grammar I could. I have a slight grasp of what it is getting at, though. It would take many weeks of reading each of the links to be able to go any further, I guess. It looks decent enough, though. DoomBringer 04:48, 12 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I removed {{cleanup}} and tagged it {{expert}} and it looks like it's already attracted one. Can probably be closed. -- Beland 03:24, 28 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]