Wikipedia:Peer review/Double the Fist/archive1

Double the Fist[edit]

Lots of info in this article; it needs a bit more detail in the episode summaries, some pictures and maybe some organizational work.-PlasmaDragon 21:07, 19 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure what is the value of the Steve Foxx, Rod Foxx, and The Womp links are since they all lead directly back to the Double the Fist article. Should they be linking to another article not yet written? If not, the links seem rather redundant to me. dozenist 23:45, 19 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
- A whole article for each character seemed like a bit much, so I have just removed the wikilinks.-PlasmaDragon 23:11, 20 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I've added more detail to the episode summaries.-212.85.24.83 13:05, 20 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
- Me too.-81.155.80.24 15:12, 20 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I loved that show... I'll never forget the one where they bagged the ABC and it stopped the show... :-) However, that said, this computer needs a major restructure. The lead section should not be so long, and in fact from what I can see of the article I would suggest moving parts of the lead section into the main body of the article. I would also suggested an overview of the show before the episode summaries. Needs a proper references section (see cite your sources). Didn't Double the Fist have a logo for the show? We could use that under fair use. - Ta bu shi da yu 13:55, 21 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
- I've added the logo, and reorganized the article. I'm unsure of how to continue with the citations. I don't own the DVDs or the book, so I can't cite those. Most of what I've added has been from memory of seeing it on TV.-PlasmaDragon 16:56, 21 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]