EDITS/REMARKS BY RYAN (the T.A.)[edit]

-*Write more about procedure in abstract

-*In procedure, tell me time of day, proximity to panhandlers, how you choose panhandler, etc.

-*Fix language details (eg passerbys, passersby)

-*Reiterate hypothesis right before method

"A Gray" <gray@umd.edu>

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