Wikipedia:Peer review/Richard Blumenthal/archive1

I started this early in my edits on Wikipedia. I'm no expert on his, but how do we fix this up? - Ta bu shi da yu 18:20, 31 Dec 2004 (UTC)

Try expanding the lead section so it summarizes the article. Also, I would like to see more included on his private life. Mgm|^(talk) 12:43, Jan 3, 2005 (UTC)
- The problem is that the stuff I've covered only covers a very small amount of his career! - Ta bu shi da yu 06:31, 24 Jan 2005 (UTC)